Monday, June 23, 2014

Webzine Reflection

   In our webzine group, I was playing a role by proofreading my teammates' essay with Jia and Jiaqi. Basically I just tried to find out some grammar error in my teammates' essays because I think my people are working perfectly in their thesis and changing the essay might break the frame of the essays. But I did show my opinions of the essay that might have a little misty focusing and trying to let my people know how the other audiences might feel when they are reading it.
   I really appreciate that this webzine group-work and class gives me a chance to know deeply about human rights. I was given a concept of global human rights issue that some people are living without protection that suppose exist while others are living safe and happily. And, by writing the webzine contribution, I had some wonderful chances to get well known with gender problem, they make me realize the world is not yet harmonious and people should do something solve the human rights violation problem. 

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